The Tender For Law

Volume 8

Oct 30, 2014 9:13 PM

Sino General

Your first paragraph not needed no need to tell him he sent to wrong party. That would be obvious by sending mail back marked. Try not to say unnecessary things. Who is you ? Did you define the party in any paragraph? Your sentence about lawyers contract with client doesn't make a lot of sense and shud be reword ed properly. The laid put terms needs to be redone. It's shorter yes but needs to be more direct and less wordy.